Thursday, August 15, 2019

speechs

i liked my speech because i am now in the speech finals. i choose my speech topic is because bullying is a serious thing and is alive today. i think i went alright cause i am in the speech finals now. i would talk slower and calm down. what do you think about my speech
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  1. AnonymousAugust 15, 2019 at 10:08 AM

    hi tyler its me kobey, i really enjoyed your speech because of how aware you were about it,one thing you need to work on is your eye contact if you had some more of that your speech would have been even more amazing.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 22, 2019 at 9:52 AM

    Hi there, my name is Dale and I am a student in LH6 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you made constant eye contact with the audience. It made me think of how hard you practised with your cue cards so you didn’t need to use them much.Have you thought about Having a clearer voice and change of tone so the audience could be more engaged with your speech. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://gisintdalek.blogspot.com/

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